The Corruption: A Keep Story

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Re: The Corruption: A Keep Story

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Corlan rolled his eyes at me, then continued his story. We weren't close enough until after they kicked you in the head. We were able to distract them long enough to pick you up, but there weren't enough of us, Kasumi was too big to try to carry her too. We retreated with you, but we had to leave her behind."
Otherwise it's looking pretty good. Poor Kasumi though! D=
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Re: The Corruption: A Keep Story

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ahhh, Thank you Mr. Only Evil Enough To Put Tape On Kitty Paws Type Editor. Hee hee.

fixed.
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Hey! We Type Editors are evil too ya know! *walks off grumbling about not getting any respect*
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