poems- would love some constructive criticism

[rainswings]

Musical Life
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[aurora37]

Mmmmmmm...laaaaaaaavly Keep it up!

You should register for poemhunter.com. Go check it out first if you want. It's got lots of cool poetry.

[rainswings]

I actually wrote the last one because I could not find poems from eighth grade. I am posting a bunch now.

[aurora37]

OMG I love Loss for the Better and Portrait of a Crush!!

[rainswings]

thank you very much. Sorry I cant think of one today. Will post one later or tomorrow

[rainswings]

I just posted some quotes

[FireCalls]

Dude! OOOmggggGggg, its...likek...lsoslsoslsoslso. gooddddd Like awsomely goodness nessyenss. Dont ask me what taht means, but its good. A complimentiant. I eallly likkike your poeetree. TYTYTYTY!

[aurora37]

I love quotes.
I love your quotes.

[Sukki]

Purdy poems indeed! I love Flight alot, despite the shortness of it. I think, tho, your poems should use more originality - poems about love and seasons are hard to make interesting, because there are so many of them.

Despite this, I think you are one pretty good poet. Good luck with improvement - because there is always room for some!

[rainswings]

Thank you very much. I think that is the first reply that gave me something to use to make my poetry better(unless i forgot one wich would not be a big suprise). Thank you so much.