Need Opinions -- the Fae

[DragonAcademy]

I used to write before so I'm good at giving ideas
now I'm working om my art - maybe draw manga one day.
When you write the story tell me so that I can read it - maybe I can come up with something else too

[GamingGal]

Sounds really nice but what's the role of the fairy girl in all of this?
Maybe you should make her befriend some other mythical creatures and go against the enemies?
Or make her go on a secret mission - to look for help from other fairies that live somewhere else?
And on the way she befriends other creatures....

Her role is having the Earth powers and being a link to the other fairies to rally them up and go against the lich/ironworks.

[Unistaja]

Does she meet any other kinds of mystical creatures though? And just curious what is her name any way?

[GamingGal]

I plan on incorporating the Cat Sith, Cu Sith, Adhene, and hopefully some others. And I do not have a name for her yet.

[Unistaja]

I don't know what any of thoughs are but ok.

[BBkat]

There are many roleplays that have supernatural creatures. Maybe you could look there if you are interested in other supernaturals. I don't know many, I think there is one called a Siren?

In all honesty a Siren is not so much supernatural as it is mythical. Also, it is not Fae. It is a being from Greek mythology that lives in/near the seas. Generally the live on an island in the ocean, surrounded by jagged rocks and rough waters. Their haunting voices draw in sailors who crash into the rocks and die. Plus, they are NOT mermaids, they have the top half of a woman and the bottom half of a bird as well as bird wings(not to be confused with harpies with while bearing the same parts are ugly and foul) and are extremely beautiful.

Considering this story takes place in a town in/near mountains a Siren is most definitely out of place.


As a note, it sounds like a very interesting story just from what I read here.

[HornedAngel]

when i read your first post, it reminded me of the series 'iron fey'
have you read it? they're very good

[XLauraX]

Sounds really good. i would read it if it's a book I like the idea with the fairy child switched with a human child and left to grow up with human parents.
Pretty good

greetings XLauraX