Anubis - Jackal

[Zovesta]

Typo on ancient in the general description, btw.

Uhm... the head is a bit too big, the shading should be more dramatic... ect. :O

[Chocobo]

The head I will fix but, I like the shading the way it is.

[Erika]

The gold almost looks shiny and real in other words, Good Job!

[Chocobo]

Lots of fixes done to the adult.

- Head was shrunken
- Better shading was done to the head
- Ribbon was shrunken a bit to be thinner and, not so close to the head
- Tail was lengthened

[Airasyraye]

Oooh, ooh, ooh! I want! Anything Egyptian-related is A-OK by me!! And it's really well made, too! I love!


(Too many !, I know. )

[Zovesta]

My only problem with the shading is... well, just try dithering.

[Chocobo]

The shading is fine as is.

[Zovesta]

Well, it seems a bit unprofessional... :O I mean, see the Ibex and such. Oh well.

[Chocobo]

I dithered the shading.
It doesn't do much.

[KooshyKoKo]

I like the sprites and descriptions, but the adult's tail bothers me just a bit.
It looks thin near the base, it gets thicker to where the gold bands are before becoming narrow very quickly.
If that could be smoothed out, I think it would look better.

The blue shows where it got thicker, the red is the sudden thickness changing area, if that makes sense.


Where the tail joins the body seems a little off as well, I just can't place why.