Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)
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Re: Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)
Yep,it's short so far,and the chapters are still considered rather short for chapters.
Otherwise,good job!
Otherwise,good job!
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Re: Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)
=3= You know its not a short story, and the chapters dont necceserally have to be as long as those in books.sugarbunneez wrote:Yep,it's short so far,and the chapters are still considered rather short for chapters.
Otherwise,good job!
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Re: Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)
Love it~ *floats in dreamlike state* I want to huggle the frying pan
Lovely. A new block of text.
WON'T BE ON MUCH THIS YEAR SO PLEASE BE PATIENT WITH ME.
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Re: Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)
Thats good. Yes aaron still shoulda got dented but I thought I would leave a bit of goryness till later.
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O.O Poor Aaron...I'd be more sorry for him if he wasn't such a jerk
Lovely. A new block of text.
WON'T BE ON MUCH THIS YEAR SO PLEASE BE PATIENT WITH ME.
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Re: Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)
CHAPTER4PLZPLZPLZ!!! Thank you very much~
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