Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)

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Re: Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)

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Yep,it's short so far,and the chapters are still considered rather short for chapters.
Otherwise,good job! ^_^
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Re: Break of Dawn~ (Read please! Chapter 3!!)

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sugarbunneez wrote:Yep,it's short so far,and the chapters are still considered rather short for chapters.
Otherwise,good job! ^_^
=3= You know its not a short story, and the chapters dont necceserally have to be as long as those in books.
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Love it~ *floats in dreamlike state* :t-X3: I want to huggle the frying pan :t-swoon:
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XD Thats good. Yes aaron still shoulda got dented but I thought I would leave a bit of goryness till later.
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O.O Poor Aaron...I'd be more sorry for him if he wasn't such a jerk D<
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XD Ill start working on chapter four.
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Bump??
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CHAPTER4PLZPLZPLZ!!! Thank you very much~
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