Hoofprints in the Snow

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Re: Hoofprints in the Snow

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Winged deer? Does it look like that?
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Re: Hoofprints in the Snow

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Your intro... is... well. i think it needs more talking to others, not so much talking to us, your addaince! But well done! :t-dance:
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Re: Hoofprints in the Snow

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pretty good! hope you continue! :aah:
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Re: Hoofprints in the Snow

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Jesus. I haven't written in so long, I don't like this story anymore, lol. :aah:
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SpiritAtSoul wrote:Jesus. I haven't written in so long, I don't like this story anymore, lol. :aah:
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pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase write more! :t-puppyeyes: :t-hugme:
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OK, I'll try. :lol:
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Re: Hoofprints in the Snow

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I like it, although I am hopeing that is not the only part of the first chapter, pretty short if it is, but I do like it. :wave:
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Locking this thread... this story sucks, to me, might rewrite it again later.
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