Anubis - Jackal

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Re: Anubis - Jackal

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I fixed the position of the body so it isn't off. And, fixed the tail so it looks more like it should be facing the proper position.
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I actually think it looks much better. XD
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It does look better, but is the bottom torso outline darker or thicker now?
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Re: Anubis - Jackal

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Personally, I like the look of the baby better than the adult, but that's just me.

I know the ears are supposed to be big like that, but they remind me of a donkey's ears, sorry. I still really like it, and anyone who likes Egyptian stuff would want one.
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Darker actually.
And the tail is thinner.

The ears don't look Donkey like at all.. :t--.-:
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Post by KooshyKoKo »

Chocobo wrote:Darker actually.
And the tail is thinner.

The ears don't look Donkey like at all.. :t--.-:
I also like how you smoothed out the back and made the torso/belly area look a little more greyhound-ish.
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