Umm... Bleach and FMA Crossover? {Chapter 5 up}

[novawatcher]

indeed. lots of exertion can cause an asthma attack. I can see why she got beaten by Hitsugaya, but now what? Is she put on trial for escaping? does she explain what she is? thats what i want to know.

[umbreon241]

They've already figured out that Kitsua's not normal, she does have dhole ears (and tail) after all.

[novawatcher]

very true, just that they dont know exactly what she is, and how she got to be like that. Well, i look forward to the next bit, and will read it as soon as it comes out.

[ML1201]

Nin nin! (watching thread like a hawk, and will be typing up more of her story when she gets the chance tomorrow).

[umbreon241]

Hey guys, I need your opinion. Do you think it's weird that Kitsua just suddenly summoned a sword (that will be important later ;D) out of fire? Do you think it needs a bit more "meat on the bones" or something? Of course, I'm planning to do something with the sword in the next chapter, but I just want to know what you think.

[ML1201]

I think the sword should be composed of flames instead of turning into metal. I say this since she used flames to make it. And what I mean by "composed of flames" is that it looks exactly like a sword but shifts in colors like a fire and also sends off heat, light and energy like a fire. Other then that it looks exactly like a sword.

[umbreon241]

Nice, I like that!
*has idea*
What do you think about the sword burning all that try to touch it except Kitsua?

[ML1201]

Nice, I like that!
*has idea*
What do you think about the sword burning all that try to touch it except Kitsua?

that would definitely fit with her powers.

[umbreon241]

I think I can write the next chappie now.

[ML1201]

(stalks thread).