Warriors- Never ending night

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Warriors- Never ending night

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Please tell me what you think and should I do Chapter 2 ??

Chapter one
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Fernkit yawned as she lied down on her sister’s fur as her sister mewed “Fernkit get off me” Featherkit complied in a mew. As Featherkit shook her light blue-gray fur as she sat down and lied down right next to Fernkit. “Okay you two go to sleep” whispered Flowerpetal
as she licked Featherkit’s pure blue-gray fur as the tongue licking her fur made it shiny.

Fernkit lied down and stared at her sisters fur then rolled over. As she then saw a Black tom with a ginger underbelly “this is your father Shadowfire” Shadowfire smiled as Flowerpetal introduced him."Nice to met you my lovely kits” he licked Fernkit on the head as she smiled and Featherkit jumped on Shadowfire’s had and laughed “Can I go play with them in the clearing ?” Shadowfire asked his mate. Flowerpetal was silent and just nodded at him as Shadowfire and the kits ran into the clearing and jumped on Shadowfire. Shadowfire then ran over to the fresh-kill pile and dropped 2 robins for them to eat. As Fernkit dug into hers and Featherkit ate it slowly then ate it whole .

Shadowfire then smiled at his kits as they chowed down the Robins. “Okay calm down now don’t eat the bones” Fernkit then looked at Featherkit and then jumped on their father. "Okay girls get off now” he then turned around "Go back in the den with your mom i have to go on a hunting patrol now".

Shadowfire ran off along with two other warriors one that was a black tom and the other a white she-cat with a black moon shape on her chest. “The white one is Snowmoon and the other one is NightWhisper” a brown tabby with darker flecks told them “I’m Frozengaze the medicine cat and your mothers sister”. Frozengaze explained to them both as a light brown she-cat ran up “Frozengaze Whitefoot has whitecough” the young apprentice told Frozengaze “thank you for telling me Dreampaw” Frozengaze gazed at her apprentice Dreampaw.

Frozengaze then toke off with her apprentice leaving Fernkit and Featherkit alone as they ran back into the den and sat down beside their mother and fell asleep.
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Re: Warriors- Never ending night

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lol, I read the first like 20 words and I love it! XD Yes, make another chapter!

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Thanks :lol:
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Chapter 2:
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A young gray tom stared into the distance as a ginger she-cat appeared over a hill and ran over “Grayflecks” The she-cat smiled “Gingerfoot “Grayflecks nodded to the clans old Medicine cat. As a dark brown tabby she-cat named Tigerriver ran up beside them “Hello Grayflecks, Gingerfoot” Tigerriver then looked down on Fernkit and Featherkit in the Queen den as they watch from above in StarClan.”Tigerriver ,Flowerpetal’s kits may be the chosen ones of the new prophecy”.

Tigerriver looked over at Grayflecks “so this is why you called us here” Tigerriver then stopped “I thought you might be able to tell us what you know about your brothers kit” Grayflecks whispered with a smirk on his gray face. Tigerriver glared at Grayflecks for trying to get her to do this and figure all this out about her own kin. as she went in for the pounce. As Gingerfoot screamed ‘STOP IT!!” Tigerriver then glared at the old medicine cat “Why should I stop I want my family to have a better life then to die in prophecy that wasn’t meant for them?” Tigerriver grumbled Tigerriver then turned her glared to the ginger fur of the old medicine cat. “Well what should We do?” Tigerriver then ran off from the conversation as she looked back to see those two StarClan cats weren’t chasing her.


Gingerfoot went to run after her then she looked behind at the Smokey gray tom ‘Grayflecks, should we follow her?” Gingerfoot questioned. Grayflecks looked up at the glowing flaming she-cat. “The bird feathers will fall as the Storm will guild the Ferns way” Gingerfoot’s deep green eyes lit from the stars above as she was in StarClan she then walked over to Fernkit and Grayflecks walked over to Featherkit and then touched noses with the kits.


Fernkit looked up at a ginger she-cat as she casually walked up to the Ginger she-cat “hello I’m Gingerfoot, you must be Fernkit” Gingerfoot crawled up to the kit “yup I’m Fernkit”. Fernkit then backed away ‘You are a chosen one “ The bird feathers will fall as the Storm will guild the Ferns way” Gingerfoot told the kit “What?” Fernkit backed up “Never mind you will find out in your own time” Gingerfoot whispered as she then disappeared ‘Gingerfoot, Gingerfoot, Where are you?” Fernkit bounced around the area.

Grayflecks walked over to Featherkit as she opened her eyes and looked up “Who are you” Featherkit hopped over “I’m Grayflecks” Featherkit looked up. “Featherkit you are a chosen one” Grayflecks began “ What?” Featherkit stepped back her body trembling. “The Bird feathers will fall as the Storm will guild the Ferns way” Grayflecks confirmed then disappeared and then Featherkit looked around “Grayflecks, where did you go?”.
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