Physic Creatures-I am looking for honest crits and spriters

[Merkwerkee]

if you could, could you tell me exactly what you find lacking in the description? i have had the same comment before, and have edited them.

and technically, these creatures are mythical. their existence has only been told in stories, and has been scientifically disproved. this makes them creatures of stories, and if you take legends as being really old stories these creatures are on their way to becoming creatures of lore.

[Zovesta]

Ah, true... Though, I still think the name should be changed. Fantasy is different from science fiction! (Though, which one is this site? )

Well, the descriptions lack depth. =P They need to be a bit longer, to tell you more about the creatures with their subtle movements...

[cyberus151]

Personally i like the name,it lets people read up on the theories, and besides, it finally forced me to learn how to pronounce a German word

[Merkwerkee]

there actually should be an umlaut over the o, but mine is an American keyboard.


and in the descriptions - i dont see how they could be made more clear.

[cyberus151]

oh and about the freshly dead, should it just look lifeless, or should it be limp with empty eyes,

[Merkwerkee]

i see. limp with empty eyes, it should be. but i dont exactly see a place to stick that in the description

[cyberus151]

Well I'm drawing it, and i want to know, as i am starting the second front right now

[Merkwerkee]

=8-0 sorry. i hadnt realized i was being difficult

[cyberus151]

No your not, not at all, i just wanted to know, should it look just died taht second, or was dead for a minute or two

[luckydog]

interesting. i like the concept, however it seems like it could be somthing more like valenth than magistream.

the only reason i feel that way is because magistream seems(to me) to give off an older era, without computers and all.