Horizon's Entry ~ Tropical Griffin ~ Please Crit! ~ UPDATED!

[AquaFae]

This is full of win.

[wolfsrain12]

you have lots of pets from differnt sites

[wingsofsilver]

I like it, but perhaps you could draw the adult to show more of the head and body? The wings look great but they seem to just take up the whole sprite.

[Valden]

Stunning! Love it, though I too would like to see more of it's face.

This is my favorite entry so far. =D

[RinnyRoo]

My only thing with your GORGEOUS creation, is that the final stage just looks like a blur of color, and hard to see what it's supposed to be.

[fantasyfreak315]

I really like it! The only thing is that I would like the adult to be more of a front view. I want to see its pretty face!

[Horizon]

I'm working on a variation, probably between male-female. The one I currently have would be the male, as a male macaw would be more likely to show off plumage rather than have the territorial stance (front view) I'm planning for the female.

[Valden]

I'm working on a variation, probably between male-female. The one I currently have would be the male, as a male macaw would be more likely to show off plumage rather than have the territorial stance (front view) I'm planning for the female.

Well in that case, keep the male as is. :3

[AquaFae]

you have lots of pets from differnt sites

It's an addiction, really... There needs to be an anonymous club or a 12-step program for people like me...

I'm working on a variation, probably between male-female. The one I currently have would be the male, as a male macaw would be more likely to show off plumage rather than have the territorial stance (front view) I'm planning for the female.

That's a great idea! So far there have only been small differences between males and females. I'd like to see a creature with completely different sprites for each gender.

[Horizon]

Thanks People, I greatly appreciate the comments/crits.

UPDATED WITH NEW FEMALE POSE!!