3rd grade me

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Sillverbreeze
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3rd grade me

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So in 3rd grade, I made this horrible little piece of writing. Of course, I was bored and wanted to write something, but I couldn't come up with any good ideas and made this "wonderful thing". So please don't enjoy it and do not critique me because it's bad on purpose and little kid me just had no idea.

dere were meny walves in a cirtin valey caled moonstruk valey and they wur vary hungre becuz springtime wud not come! there food the cariboos wur not coming becuz there wus no yumy plants for them to eat. the walves wur unhapy so they went to were the cariboos lived and ate them up and went home. den it wus spring agen and they lived hapily ever after
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Re: 3rd grade me

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That's weird. :)
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Hahaha. That made me laugh.
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I'd say that's pretty good for a 3rd grader. I definitely wasn't creative enough then to try and write a story.
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not bad for third grade, also



CUUUUUUUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CARIBOOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dem cariboos
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