Critiquing your stories

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Critiquing your stories

Post by MissMurderPaws »

I will read your stories for absolutly nothing. if you want my opinion only 500g is required. I can spell and grammar check for only 2k and tell you what i think, where i think it needs some work and where you got it right. Just send me the story or the link to it :wave:
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Hm, maybe if you spelled "grammar" and "is" correctly, and if your other posts in the tea house had a history of better grammar, I would be more inclined to take you seriously. Also, your first sentence is a comma splice.
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i know imma fix, there is a lizard on my compy soooo...
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