Sort-of Magistream Story

[andypie1010]

((OK, I wanted to do a Pokemon/Magistream Story, but I couldn't think of any ideas for names, So I'm doing a medieval MS!))




A long time ago.....
He ran. The forest felt like it was closing in on him. Hard branches slapped at his face and roots threatened to trip him. He could feel it behind him. Closing in. Closer. Panting, Max sat up quickly. "Max! Breakfast!" He got up and got dressed. "Coming mom!" He went to the kitchen. His mom was cooking eggs. She looked up. "Why are you sweaty?" she asked. "You just got up!" Max didn't say anything. His mom sighed. "I sometimes feel like I'm talking to a donkey"
"I'm not a donkey!
"Well, you act like one." said his mom. "Well? What are you waiting for? Go wake your sister." Max went to his 5-year old sister's bed and started to tickle her to wake her up. She squirmed and then smiled. "Come on, you're not sleeping!" He laughed. She giggled and sat up. "Can I come with you to the market today?"
"No! you might get grabbed by bad people." Max said. She asked this every day, but she was too little. She walked over to the table and reached for the sugar. "Not today, Lucy" Their mother said. "Only on Sundays, you know that!"
"Awww....Just a little?"
"No! Max, eat fast and go to the market and get 3 eggs and a hatchet to chop wood. The other one is broken. " She gave him some money. Max wolfed down his egg, and ran out of the door to the market.

((How is it?))

[Lunaheart]

I believe this is in the wrong place

[andypie1010]

Ohh, yeah. Thanks for telling me that! Fixed

[Lunaheart]

no prob