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Arrietty
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Post by Arrietty »

(I am still working on this thread but you are more than welcome to post what you think or if you have an idea about something feel free to tell what's on your mind.)
Rules:
1) Opinions welcomed, No Flaming; saying rude things about my story and being difficult.
2) You many tell me if there is anything that needs to be fixed, I tend to mess up with pass and present tense.
That's it on the rules, lol not so many keeping it short usually sends the message :P

Prologue:
It's been over a two thousand years since a world disaster nearly wiped out the human race and many animal species. Technically had been lost, the old way of living died out, so in order to start anew colonies were formed. Countries were recreated, the era seemed to have turned back to ancient times. Very few documents survived but are kept safe somewhere that has too been forgotten.

Ruins of huge structures shadow over the land, many look like skeletons. Some are off limits do to safety hazards or other reasons. But that's not all that changed. Several animals evolved to fit the ever changing world. Some are monstrous creatures while others are small yet still so deadly. Humans too had taken a biology change but more than ninety percent remained the same.
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Re: Taking in Story Ideas!

Post by TheStrangeWeirdo »

I'm not too sure exactly where you're up to, but I'll tell you what I'd write next.
Maybe have the half-bloods come for Silas again, and either Silas runs away with the girl - whatever her name is - or Silas disappears in the dead of the night or something and she runs after him.
There's quite a few variations to either main option, so just go with what your gut tells you.
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