my entrys ready for critique! updated now 2 creatures!
my entrys ready for critique! updated now 2 creatures!
entry 1: hell hound
adult/overall description-
the hell hound is a fiery demon. appearing dog or wolf like, they are generally black furred with flames running along their entire body. they also have large slightly curved fangs. many hell hounds have cruel horns similar to that of a bull. it is said that if you look into a hell hounds eyes you will see your death.
i realize that this isnt that great, however i did the best i could. it will need some(o.k. lots) of modifications, however this is as good as i can do.
one thing i really wanted to get on it but couldn't were the flames.
information-
they are generally seen guarding the gates to the land of the dead. however they have the ability to move from place to place almost instantaneously, thus they have been seen nearly everywhere. it is said that if you look into a hell hounds eyes you will see your death.
egg- a nearly translucent black with flames running through it.
hatchling- similar to adult except for
smaller
no horns, just stubs
smaller fangs
dark gray, black
entry 2: duck
due to the fact there isn't anything that would normally be found in a stream and for a lol
description
You see something that doesn't belong in the lake. A duck. Periodically it will suddenly flip itself so that it's head is under the water, and then come up with a small fish. It seems to love bread, occasionally it will fly by a young student and steal his or her sandwich.
visual
these are just so that we can have an idea of something it may look like if it's chosen
adult
hatchling
egg
adult/overall description-
the hell hound is a fiery demon. appearing dog or wolf like, they are generally black furred with flames running along their entire body. they also have large slightly curved fangs. many hell hounds have cruel horns similar to that of a bull. it is said that if you look into a hell hounds eyes you will see your death.
i realize that this isnt that great, however i did the best i could. it will need some(o.k. lots) of modifications, however this is as good as i can do.
one thing i really wanted to get on it but couldn't were the flames.
information-
they are generally seen guarding the gates to the land of the dead. however they have the ability to move from place to place almost instantaneously, thus they have been seen nearly everywhere. it is said that if you look into a hell hounds eyes you will see your death.
egg- a nearly translucent black with flames running through it.
hatchling- similar to adult except for
smaller
no horns, just stubs
smaller fangs
dark gray, black
entry 2: duck
due to the fact there isn't anything that would normally be found in a stream and for a lol
description
You see something that doesn't belong in the lake. A duck. Periodically it will suddenly flip itself so that it's head is under the water, and then come up with a small fish. It seems to love bread, occasionally it will fly by a young student and steal his or her sandwich.
visual
these are just so that we can have an idea of something it may look like if it's chosen
adult
hatchling
egg
Last edited by luckydog on September 15th, 2009, 10:27:36 pm, edited 5 times in total.
Re: hell hound- my entry, now ready for critique!
uh yeah this is to get this to the top since it is now critique
i have morgaln's permission to do this.
i have morgaln's permission to do this.
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Re: my entry(s) ready for critique!
Hm...I like the hellhound, but you might want to add more description to the hatchling and make it more MagiStream-like.
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Re: my entry(s) ready for critique!
description for hatchling is now more complete
do you like it?
do you like it?
Re: my entry(s) ready for critique!
mazzi told me i can bumb once a day i didnt know that i could.
so
bump
so
bump
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Re: my entry(s) ready for critique!
interesting, but i must say, your picture shows you to have a greatly hidden artistic talent, like me
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Re: my entry(s) ready for critique!
what do you mean? that alone took me almost 2 hours!
Re: my entry(s) ready for critique!
exactly thats why i chose it. something like what i drew only more menacing and with flames along it's body.
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my pictures take me forever too. at least you have something to show for it however. my pictures dont look half so good. its a compliment
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