Harry Potter Fan Fiction!

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So, I have made a harry potter fan fiction! I have published it on another website, but this is what I have so far

IMMORTALITY
CHAPTER ONE: THE CREATURE
He woke up to a strange noise. It was coming from the kitchen... We grabbed his wand from the side table and walked slowly out of his room. The house was old, dingy, unused for many years. He walked through the sitting room into his kitchen. There stood the biggest dog-like creature he'd ever seen. He approached it slowly, keen not to get too close. He stopped abruptly; it had heard him. It turned around quickly, its eyes flashed yellow, then it attacked him. It had his wand arm tightly; he lost his grip on his wand and dropped it. He then tried to pry off the animal with his right hand, a bad idea. It grabbed his right wrist in its jaws and bit down hard. He heard his bones snapping; he felt his conciousness slipping from him... It let go and bit his right side very hard... He heard someone scream "STUPIFY!" just before he lost conciousness..

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CHAPTER TWO: PAINFUL PAST
He was with his mum again, in a Doctor's office. He was five years old again, a Muggle-Born Wizard. He didn't really like the doctor there, he was always so rough with him. At that moment, a tall man walked in, passed the Receptionist's desk, and stood facing the corner. All at once, the man turned around, pulled out a stick of some sort, and a green light came out of the end and hit his mother. He ran over to her, worried about what had happened. She had collapsed. He took her pulse. Nothing. He looked up at the strange man. The man grinned maliciously at him. He turned and ran as fast as he could out the door, tears building in his eyes. He ran until he came to a lake. He stopped there, staring out across the lake. Suddenly, a tent and three people appeared across the lake. One of them turned and saw him. He suddenly had the urge to jump in and swim to them... He took a brave leap and began to swim across. When his feet no longer touched bottom, he went under. He came back up, coughing and spluttering. He was going to drown... Suddenly one of the people jumped in and began swimming quickly toward him...

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CHAPTER THREE: THE PEOPLE
He woke up lying in a bed, wearing clothes much too big for him, in what seemed like the tent. He sat up a little, and then noticed someone with extremely red hair sitting a few feet away. He sat up more and noticed two more people sitting there, one with messy black hair, the other with bushy brown hair. The one with messy black hair noticed him first, and nudged the other two. The one with red hair got up and walked over. 'Er, so you're up. I'm Ron. That's Harry, and Hermione,' he told the boy. 'Er,' he began shyly, 'I'm Daniel, b-but most people call me Dan...' There was silence for a few moments, before Hermione spoke. 'So, what happened before you found us?' He recounted his story to the three of them, and when he finished, Harry said, 'So, this guy has to be a Wizard... Was he wearing a mask?' 'Er, I think so,' Daniel replied. He looked at the other two in a way Daniel understood to mean 'We'll talk later.' He stayed with the three of them from then on, discovered he too was a Wizard, and went through years 1 through 7 at Hogwarts. He was now in the real world on his own. Zandervolt, a poweful Wizard gone mad, and hadn't heard from them for ages...

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CHAPTER FOUR: ZANDERVOLT
He woke up in the present in that same tent. He instantly noticed a stabbing pain in his right wrist, left arm, and right side. He sat up slowly to notice the tent was empty. He hoped it was Ron, Hermione, or Harry who'd rescued him... Suddenly the tent flap opened, and Ron came in. 'Finally you're awake! We've been waiting ages for you to get up! Er, you're fairly injured, we've all been worried that you wouldn't make it, but here you are!' 'What attacked me, Ron?' Daniel asked. 'We're not sure yet, it's not in Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, Hermione's read it through twice already...' His voice trailed off. Then Harry walked in. 'Look, Harry, he's alright!' Ron said excitedly. 'Alright, Hermione and I have figured out something, but it's bad. The kids were captured by Zandervolt, and we'll have to rescue them.' 'Wait, what?! Zandervolt took the kids? But, how?' 'They went after him after overhearing one of Harry's ideas. It's been two weeks since they set off, and Albus is still with us. He's with Ginny and Hermione right now, they're doing something, I dunno what,' Ron explained. Daniel just sat quietly for a moment. Then, he asked, 'How do you plan to save them, exactly?' 'We need a plan, that's all we have hope for is an actual plan.' Hermione had just walked in, followed by Ginny and Albus. 'Dan! When did he get here?' 'Albus, he's been here, remember? Since yesterday morning!' Ginny told him. 'Oh, er, right, yeah...' They immediately began to plan out how to fight Zandervolt. The enchantments around him were so powerful, many were killed just on impact. It took loads of planning. Finally, two more weeks later, they were as ready as they could be. Daniel hadn't quite entirely healed yet, but was as ready as he could be at that moment. They set off for where Zandervolt's last sighting was. They Apperated to London, then had to go on foot to search for him. 'Actually, I think Albus would be better off with Teddy after all, could I just take him there and you wait for me near the Leaky Cauldron?' 'Ginny, you were so sure he could come with us five minutes ago...' 'Yeah, Ron, but maybe I have changed my mind and think he'd be safer elsewhere!' She disappeared. 'She'll be back, she forgot Albus...' CRACK. She was back. 'I forgot...' 'Yes, we know, you forgot Albus,' Ron said irritably. She took Albus's hand and disappeared again.


This is all I have for now!