Book 1 in the Dragons of Arillia series
Draft 1.4
Summary:
Spoiler
Young dragon Pierce has lived his life believing that he is worthless, too small, too weak, all he has is knowledge, and a healthy fear of his clutchmates. But when his sister, Poison, recklessly gets them kidnapped by humans it's up to him to rescue her and find a way home, with a little help from some unlikely allies, and a strength that he never knew he had.
Red, Pierce's older brother, has never been one to act without orders, but there is nobody to tell you how to solve your problems or live a full life, then war breaks out between the kingdom of the fire dragons and the humans, and his aunt begins to crack under the weight of her duties as Queen. Red must learn to act, to take charge, or risk losing everything, his friends, his family, and the future he didn't know that he wanted.
Red, Pierce's older brother, has never been one to act without orders, but there is nobody to tell you how to solve your problems or live a full life, then war breaks out between the kingdom of the fire dragons and the humans, and his aunt begins to crack under the weight of her duties as Queen. Red must learn to act, to take charge, or risk losing everything, his friends, his family, and the future he didn't know that he wanted.
Red watched as Zephyr tossed the glass orb into the air and caught it again before lobbing it into the lake, the light it had been enchanted to glow with gleamed under the surface for a moment before it had sunk too deep to see.
“Whose turn is it this time?” Zephyr asked, looking around at the group of dragons.
Today was an uncommon day, a day when Red and all of his closest friends were able to gather at their favorite spot to hang out, Lonely Lake. Dawn, who he had met in warrior training, was a metallic and pink scaled dragoness, then there were Zephyr and Night, Red’s best friends since before he could fly, Zephyr’s scales were the color often used to portray the depths of the ocean in paintings, and Night’s scale coloration matched his name, dark as midnight but with under scales white like the moon, lastly there was Zephyr’s elder brother, Cove, who’s scales were the colors of dark rock and winter sky.
“I’ll go next,” Cove said, wading into the shallows, mud clouding the water as it was stirred by his steps.
Red’s friends had been taking turns retrieving the glowing orb from the bottom of the lake, and he had abstained from the activity. He could stand to be in the water as long as he could touch the bottom, but diving to the bottom of a lake was too much to ask, and the cold water would cause his right wing to ache, his stomach clenched just watching the others go under.
“Are you sure you don’t mind?” Dawn asked him as Cove submerged, her shiny scales were still covered in water droplets from taking her own turn, “We could just do something else that you can participate in.”
“Don’t worry about me,” he replied, “I’m okay with watching, just because I’m not participating in the game doesn’t mean I’m not hanging out.”
“I guess so,” she replied, brushing droplets of water off of her baby pink chest scales, “How has the Queen been, last I saw her she seemed a bit stressed?”
“She’s been worried about the tension at the border, the humans are really starting to make trouble, I say it’s fortunate nobody up there has gotten hurt yet.”
“You don’t think we’ll go to war do you?” Dawn’s wing’s spread slightly as if she planned to fly to battle that instant.
“I don’t know, we’ve never exactly been on friendly terms with the humans, the tension has only grown more and more, even old Calla can’t remember a time when we were at peace with them. I wouldn’t be surprised if it happened.”
“I don’t understand, why can’t they leave us alone, why must they always stir up trouble?”
“I hear that they harvest the bodies of dragons they’ve murdered to make weapons and armor.” Zephyr chipped in, blue eyes wide.
“I suppose they see us as no different from mindless animals like bears, and wolves, something to either tame or destroy.” Night growled.
“Could we not live in peace with them, if we tried?” Dawn asked.
Red scoffed, “Peace is fine by me, but humans are selfish monsters who know nothing but hate for our kind, I don’t think they’ll be satisfied until or kingdom is in ruins and all the dragons of Arillia are either dead or enslaved.
“Cove’s sure taking his time down there,” Night said, bringing everyone’s attention to the water, which was eerily still.
Dawn frowned, “He’s probably just having some trouble finding it.”
The four of them silently watched the surface of the water, Red trying to push away his irrational fears. It probably felt like they were waiting for longer than they were, but after a time there was no doubt that Cove was taking longer than he should.
“Someone should at least check on him.” Dawn decided.
Zephyr sprinted into the shallows and slipped into the deep water like an otter. Dawn ran along the shore towards the river that fed into the lake and called out to the aquatic dragons who were relaxing on the rocks. Red for one felt useless and his anxiety was rising.
“I’ll go get a healer, just in case.” Night said.
“No, I’ll go,” Red replied, getting to his feet, “You probably know more first aid than me so if something has happened and a healer doesn’t get here soon enough you’ll be more useful than me.”
Night gave a nod, and looked slightly relieved, “I think Moon is the closest, at least of the healers I know.”
Red got a running start and then leapt into the air with a powerful flap of his red and gold wings, ignoring the pain it caused in the right one. He racked his brain to remember the way to Moon’s den, he hadn’t visited often, but he found it relatively quickly and hurried in. Most noticeable about the place was the strong smell of herbs, with a hint of blood, there were beds laid out on the floor, shelves stocked with bandages, jars, and baskets lining every wall, and it was quite empty aside from the healer, a sleeping old dragon, and a mother with her fledgling.
The white and gray dragoness had stopped in the middle of wrapping clean cotton bandages around the fledgling’s foreleg. “Red, what brings you here?” she asked, now hurrying to finish up what she was doing, “If you’re here on Night’s behalf then you can tell him-”
“No, it’s Cove,” Red interrupted, “There’s no time to explain, I have no idea if he’s okay or not.”
Moon thrust a roll of bandages and a jar of something towards the fledgling’s mother saying, “Put this on it daily and rewrap the wound,” then slung a leather satchel around her neck and followed Red out of the den, back to the lake.
When they arrived they found Cove laying on the shore coughing, hacking, and holding a bleeding foreleg close to his chest while Zephyr and the others stood anxiously around him.
“What happened?” Moon asked, getting right to work, listening to his breathing and taking out jars of various medicines.
“He nearly drowned,” Zephyr replied, his voice shaking slightly, “He was trying to retrieve an orb from the lake and his leg got caught in some rocks.”
“It’s lucky you freed him in time,” Moon replied, wrapping some bandages around the wounded leg, “He should be fine after a little rest.”
“Thank you for coming so quickly,” Zephyr said, “I hope you weren’t very busy.”
“No, it was just the usual, sprains, cuts, thorns…” Moon turned to Red, “It’s been awhile since I last saw Violet, do you know when she’ll be visiting?”
“Yes, she’s coming tomorrow actually, I’m sure she’ll be happy to see you again.”
Moon smiled, “We could have a nice little reunion, all of us, it’d be almost like when we were in school.”
“Yeah…” Red replied distractedly, he’d noticed that Night had been slowly retreating.
Moon followed his gaze and her amber eyes met Night’s, the tension in the air was like a rubber band pulled too tight, ready to snap, but then Moon looked away and Night seemed to wilt.
“I should get back to my den,” Moon said, “I might have patients waiting, it could be urgent.”
“Right,” Zephyr replied, looking awkward, “See you around then.”
“I’ll tell Violet to pay you a visit,” Red added.
When she was gone everyone looked at Night, who glared back and snapped, “Mind your own business!”
“Hey, nobody said anything,” Dawn protested.
Cove shifted, heaved himself onto his feet amid protests from his brother, and he said, “I’m fine now, I can’t lay here all day.”
“Moon said to rest,” Zephyr replied.
“All I did was stand up,” Cove chuckled, though it turned into a cough, “Sorry, my throat still feels a bit rough.”
“The medicine Moon gave you should start to help,” Night replied.
“Yes, speaking of Moon…” Cove said, giving Night a significant look, “Follow me.”
“I don’t want to talk.” Night protested.
“I didn’t ask to talk,” Cove replied earnestly, “You’re free to be silent.”
With a heavy sigh, Night and the older drake walked along the shore until they were well out of earshot and settled down by the water.
“He’s such a dad,” Zephyr chuckled, “When me and my clutch were very young he was always helping mom and dad wrangle us, they’ve always been extremely grateful.”
“He’s like a second Tide.” Dawn joked.
Tide was their mentor in warrior training, he was wise and always seemed to know what to say. Red regretted that he hadn’t kept in better contact with Tide in the eight years since graduating.
“Oh!” Zephyr said suddenly, “Dawn, could you summon the orb back? I was more concerned with getting Cove to the surface than grabbing it.”
Dawn sighed, “It was exhausting enough just lighting it up, why don’t you learn a thing or two about magic and do it yourself? I haven’t got unlimited magical energy you know!”
“I can’t,” Zephyr complained, “When the tester checked me for magical potential he said that he was horrified by my lack of magical ability, I couldn’t make a scale glow, certainly not without passing out!”
Red stifled a laugh, he didn’t have any right to, he had barely any more magical energy than Zephyr did, a light spell like Dawn’s would give him nausea and a severe headache, he knew because he’d tried it once, and only once. Fire dragons had a greater number of mages than any other species in Arillia but still at least fifty percent of them had barely any magical energy at all.
“Have Cove do it,” Dawn replied, “Having a splitting headache doesn’t appeal to me, just because I have more magic than you doesn’t make me a mage.”
“My brother nearly drowned.”
“Nearly drowning doesn’t reduce one’s magical energy Zephyr, he’s not frail.”
“Are you two going to bicker all afternoon?” Red asked, “It’s not like it really matters, we can just get another one.”
“Glassmakers are stingier than magma dragons,” Zephyr grumbled, “They always want a sack of materials in exchange, gemstones and stuff, even if you’re just asking for a simple orb.”
“Hey!” Dawn snapped, “My mom wasn’t stingy, and glassmaking isn’t simple!”
“Your mom’s a glassmaker?” Red asked, partially to interrupt the two and partially because of genuine interest, Dawn never talked about her family aside from complaining about her clutch brothers’ annoying habits.
“She was,” Dawn sighed, “I have a collection of marbles she made for me when I was little.”
“What happened?” Zephyr asked, “Why isn’t she still a glassmaker?”
“Tact isn’t your thing, is it?” Dawn replied.
“I guess that means you won’t answer?”
“I don’t have to divulge my life story to you.” Dawn replied.
“I thought we were friends,” Zephyr said in mock offence, to which Dawn just rolled her eyes.
“Why don’t you talk about your family if you’re so keen on the topic?” Dawn asked.
“There’s not much to tell, except for Cove my brothers and sisters are all working as healers, minor mages, and artists. Some of my older siblings have gotten married now, a few have clutches, my nieces and nephews are loud and obnoxious to no end, I haven’t spoken to my extended family in a while, and my parents are enjoying a quiet, peaceful life without any of us left in the den. Red’s family is probably more interesting.”
“What, just because my dad is the queen’s half-brother?” Red snorted.
“Nah,” Zephyr replied, “You don’t even talk to your extended family aside from Queen Orchid, I like to hear what the little ones are up to.”
“You would have been so offended if someone had called you a ‘little one’ when you were sixteen,” Dawn pointed out.
“They’re sixteen now?” Zephyr’s expression became disturbed, “I feel freakin’ old now, I was thirteen when they hatched!”
“I thought you already knew your age.” Dawn chuckled, “Next year you’ll join me in the early thirties!”
“We haven’t even lived a third of our lives yet,” Red reminded, “But yes, they’re sixteen now, three of them are in warrior training, one is in mage training, and one is a scholar, he mainly studies history.”
“Do Gem and Smoke still pick on Pierce?” Dawn asked.
“Yeah, how’s the little runt holding up?”
“Probably,” Red sighed, “I wish he would learn to defend himself, last I knew he would just roll over and take it.”
“Your parents don’t do anything to stop it?” Zephyr asked.
“Dad doesn’t care and it always happens when mom’s not around, Pierce doesn’t tell her anything either, he’s gotten sickeningly good at hiding injuries--Scarlet has always had an interest in healing, I suspect she helps him--but he can also take a beating surprisingly well, though he shouldn’t have to.”
“I don’t get how anyone could treat their own brother that way,” Dawn said, “Just because he’s smaller?”
The conversation was broken off there by the return of Cove and Night.
“What’re you guys talking about?” Cove asked.
“Just my screwed up family!” Red replied with sarcastic cheer.
Zephyr failed to stifle his laughter and gave up trying, between laughs he managed to say, “Dude, how do you say it like that? That’s what’s really screwed up!”
Cove’s expression was a mix between amused and concerned, while Night responded as was typical, barely any reaction at all.
Red shared a small laugh then said, “But seriously, Smoke is one messed up dragon, if I were his parent I wouldn’t let him anywhere near sharp objects, he’s too violent.”
“If I were his parent i’d have tanned his hide ages ago,” Dawn replied, “Messed up is putting it lightly, I wouldn’t tolerate that kind of behavior.”
“He’s still attacking Pierce?” Cove asked, looking at Red very seriously, “If your parents aren’t doing anything about it then you’d better step in, if it were Zephyr being bullied I would have done something about it ages ago.”
“All you had to do was look at them and nobody even wanted to try anything,” Zephyr replied, “From what I’ve heard, Smoke doesn’t find anyone very intimidating.”
“If intimidation hadn’t worked, I wasn’t all bark and no bite,” Cove affirmed, “That little punk needs to be stopped, one way or another.”
“Jeez, you are kinda scary,” Dawn said, “Smoke is lucky not to have you for an older brother.”
“I’d say he and Pierce are both unlucky,” Cove replied, then looked pointedly at Red, “If you keep running from your parents you’ll never be there for your siblings, Pierce especially.”
Red tensed, his instinct was to go into a more aggressive stance, but Cove was the last dragon he wanted to pick a fight with, not only was he intimidating and more experienced, but Red respected him, “I’m not running away,” his voice wavered, he didn’t even have himself convinced.
Cove hummed and replied, “If you say so, but at least think about my words a little, in the end family is all you’ve got. I’m sure Poison and Scarlet have their brother’s back, but neither of them present the slightest threat, they can’t make Smoke stop.”
“Poison is training to be a warrior as well-”
“But she’s the bottom of her class,” Cove interrupted, “Tide says that bullying from her classmates, including her own siblings, has destroyed what little confidence she had, therefore she has progressed very little. It seems Pierce is no longer the only target, and I am disappointed that you didn’t already know this, they’re your siblings, not mine.”
This dragon had nearly drowned earlier? Red had no words to defend himself, Cove being disappointed was as bad as his own parents being disappointed, but as much respect as he had for the other drake, at that moment Red hated how sickeningly perfect he always seemed, he never seemed to say or do anything wrong, Red didn’t think he’d faced a single challenge in his life. It was even worse that Cove was scolding him in front of everyone else, no matter how right or wrong he was.
After a moment of tense silence Cove sighed, “I apologize, you’re not open about it but I understand your struggles, I suppose sometimes I forget that your situation as very different from my own experiences, but still I encourage you to do what you can.”
“I don’t understand.” Red replied, “You weren’t wrong, I should be more invested in their lives.”
“I wasn’t being fair though, I got upset, I-”
“Stop being so perfect, you’re making me wanna bite you!” Red snapped.
Cove laughed, “That’s fair, but I wouldn’t call myself perfect, I’m just better at hiding my mistakes!”
“He is awfully mysterious about what he’s been up to sometimes,” Zephyr added, “One time he came home with his face all scratched up and snapped at me when I asked what happened.”
The smile on Cove’s face vanished completely, replaced by a look of grief and anger that Red had never seen on the older drake before, the change was alarming to say the least.
“I’m scared to ask,” Dawn muttered.
Cove shook himself, forced a more pleasant expression, and said with false cheer, “Let’s not talk about that.”
Artwork is mine.
Author's note:
Spoiler
Glad to have found another place to share my story and hopefully get some critique!
I'm going to add the chapters here over time, but the novel in its entirety is already posted on Wattpad if you are desperate for more (which I doubt ).
https://www.wattpad.com/story/167136789 ... -draft-1-4
I both got the idea for, and started work on this story on August 9th, 2015 (Red's randomly generated hatchday), under the working title "Noble Beast." After beginning, and subsequently scrapping, four other versions of the story (one of which I'd barely even started, so I usually don't count it), I finally finished drafting it on November 10th of 2018.
I have a writing group where I've been sharing it for critique, but I don't think one can ever have too much critique! Even if sharing my novel somewhere makes me SUPER nervous at first haha!
I hope to publish it someday, but until then this thing needs to get critiqued and go through some revisions!
You are encouraged to make posts on the thread, or simply PM me your thoughts, I love nothing more than knowing what everyone thinks, I would even love for you to tell me every thought that pops into your head as you read if you wanted to!
I'm going to add the chapters here over time, but the novel in its entirety is already posted on Wattpad if you are desperate for more (which I doubt ).
https://www.wattpad.com/story/167136789 ... -draft-1-4
I both got the idea for, and started work on this story on August 9th, 2015 (Red's randomly generated hatchday), under the working title "Noble Beast." After beginning, and subsequently scrapping, four other versions of the story (one of which I'd barely even started, so I usually don't count it), I finally finished drafting it on November 10th of 2018.
I have a writing group where I've been sharing it for critique, but I don't think one can ever have too much critique! Even if sharing my novel somewhere makes me SUPER nervous at first haha!
I hope to publish it someday, but until then this thing needs to get critiqued and go through some revisions!
You are encouraged to make posts on the thread, or simply PM me your thoughts, I love nothing more than knowing what everyone thinks, I would even love for you to tell me every thought that pops into your head as you read if you wanted to!