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The Journey

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Plot: There's a lone wolf. He meets a female wolf. They start a pack and have 5 pups. 3 males, and 2 females. When tradgedy strikes, the pups must go on a long journey to survive. Can they handle the harsh wilderness?

Characters: Lone male: Raziq
Lone Female: Noaza
Male Pups: Kuyo, Tujo, Halthbris
Female Pups: Qawn, Kayto


Chapter 1- The fight
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Raziq was prowling the forest. Now reader, he had left his old pack to be a loner and make his own pack. He was going to show his Alpha how strong he was. He was going to make his own pack. First, though, he had to get a mate. That's why he was prowling the forest. Then, he saw a movement in the bushes. He cautiously walked over. Thats when another male wolf attacked him. They were a gaint ball of fur and blood. Finally, the male stopped. He pinned Raziq down. "Leave now," Raziq did as he was told, and left. He hadn't realized he was in another wolf's territory. He left, limping, and sad. He was covered in blood stains, and now, his fur was matted.How could he find a mate, if he couldn't even fight? How was he supposed to prtoect a whole family?
“We are all a little weird and life's a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.”
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Re: The Journey

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It's a nice story, but you might want to make the chapters longer. :wave:
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Re: The Journey

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Thx.. AND DONT WORRY...it will get longer... (laughs evily..)
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Re: The Journey

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fluffycat68 wrote:Thx.. AND DONT WORRY...it will get longer... (laughs evily..)
Oh gosh... :lol:
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