The dangerous fight (Wolfstory^^)

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The dangerous fight (Wolfstory^^)

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So...I'm writing a story...well...here's the contents:
(not so good english, because it's german and translated by a translator ^-^ if there are german words in the text, say it to me, and I correct it... :facepalm:

Contents:

In a far away empire, beyond the human world, lies the Sagahami level. There the world is not governed by us people. But from wolves. There are four empires with four herds. Every herd has his own empire. The herds believe in a wolf God Kokomari Kan. Everything felt well... up to one day...

Herd Takahami

Alpha wolves: Black Kan (m), Malayra (w)

older wolves: Borgo (m), Thalia (w)

Young wolves: Aida (w), Shira (w), Mika (m), Siko (m), Tania (w), Mira (w), Mila (w)

Puppies: Siki (m), Mintaka (w), Venera (w), Nahaki (w), Taro (m), Sahira (w), Lilia (w), Linoka (m)


Herd Takahami: They are quick runners and have the wood as her own empire. The herd would kill no wolf from fun or hunger. They mean this would not be necessary and they would rather die themselves than to kill a wolf from hunger. The Takahami help themselves in the herd also always mutually. However, now one should not think that this herd cannot fight. This is able to do it because well. If another, big herd wanted to exterminate a smaller one, the herd Takahami would help the smaller. No matter whether the chances were a zero.
Herd Likosa

Alpha wolves: Saro Kan (m), Biara (w)

older wolves: Mino (m), Gora (w), Lagi (w)

Young wolves: Eira (w), Morgana (w), Liko (m), Minga (w), Shirkan (m)

Puppies: /

Herd Likosa: They are honourary-worthy opponents in the fight and her empire is the desert. There the herd has learnt to be robustly and hard like stone. The herd Likosa is, so to speak, the exact opposite of the herd Takahami. The Likosa would kill other wolves from hunger and in her herd everybody itself does itself also supply. If a wolf had an illness, the others would make nothing at all. There the puppies are taught immediately in it to be bloody.
Herd Naki

Alpha wolves: Boro Kan (m), Lihara (w)

older wolves: Sorba (w), Sirina (w), Kari (m), Largo (m)

Young wolves: Mari (m), Goro (m)

Puppies: Klisi (w)

Herd Naki: This herd is also on the good side. They have the wide meadow as her empire. In the fight they are not virtually the other herds, however, them are not bad. Moreover, they cannot put up with the herd Likosa. Summarised they are quite nice.

Herd Tokohana

Alpha wolves: Siso Kan (m), Vora (w)

older wolves: /

Young wolves: Lora (w), Birko (m), Malo (m), Digi (w)

Puppies: Weira (w), Milgo (m), Xoro (m)

Herd Tokohana: This herd is unequivocal on the bad side. Their empire is the valley of the small volcanoes. Though the volcanoes do not break out, however, them look dangerous. Moreover, there is a rather warm area. The wolves have selected the herd Likosa to themselves as a model and want to as be angry sometime sometimes as they.


1. Chapter

It was a warm spring morning. The sun appeared behind the hills and the dewdrops slided from the sheets. The drops threw small rainbows in the air if the sun on them seemed. Thus it was in the Sagahami level. All animals them there lived were happy. The roe deer because there was enough grass and meadows where they could stay. The mice because the earth was well to the cave construction. And the other animals also. But most happily were the wolves. There were 4 herds and everybody had his own empire. The herd Takahami, The herd Likosa, the Tokohana and the herd Naki. But the herd from what this story acts is primarily the herd Takahami.

The light the alpha wolves of the Takahami of herd seemed by the sheets in the construction. They were called Black Kan and Malayra. Malayra was light grey with light tan with Black Kan in it was quite black.

The female alpha wolf rose from her position and walked from her construction. When she was outdoors, she had to do to herself her eyes zukneifen because the sun smiled at them so brightly.>> Black Kan! Show! The sun seems and the snow is already almost weggetaut. <<From the construction he answered quietly and unambiguously tiredly:>> I amount and then go go hunting. Wake you already everybody. <<And this the signal was for the light grey female wolf. She pushed her head upwards, leant back him easily and howled from body forces. The echo of her call resounded by the wood. Shortly after heads from the wolfcaves pushed bit by bit. Everybody still seemed rather tiredly except the puppies. Bigger from them ran from her construction and knocked flying themselves on the clearing. Probably they were up long time ago!, imagined Malayra. She trotted to them and asked:>> Well, well slept? <<From the small crowd the einzigste black puppy crowded forwards. It was Nahaki.>> Ähm! <<Behind her the small wolves started to giggle. Malayra already knew what was called this and, therefore, it probed once more.>> Really? Or have you done only nonsense? <<This time another puppy came forwards and knocked down Nahaki.>> no! Nevertheless, we would never make nonsense. <<The puppy was Linoka. The a female alpha wolf answered:>> I know that all that is not right what you say, Linoka. And simply do not knock flying Nahaki! She is, finally, also your sister. <<Malayra took the small black and put them again. now>> And do not catch to you to argue! <<, Nevertheless, this had said Malayra too late. Nahaki stood up to full size and upset Linoka. However, this stepped with his hind legs after her and she fell down again. He wanted to buckle on them and, however, you easily in the belly bite Malayra caught him in the jump. Finally, she set down him again at another place.>> What I said?! You should not argue. Or should Kokomari Kan get angry and curse you? <<Like a miracle both sat still and were quiet. All the others also.Malayra caught to the history to tell:

>> Once Kokomari Kan an alpha had been Wolf him has died as him his herd wanted to save. He fought against the bad leader of the herd what of his wanted to exterminate. The leader, nevertheless, vanquished Kokomari Kan and took over his herd. Kokomari Kans woman the bad alpha got Wolf and bit by bit she got also angry. Thus originated the herd Likosa. Today the mind of Kokomari Kan should still float above the Sagahami-level and search the leader of the herd Likosa. But he can be also dear. If you are nice, he brings you maybe something. <<

According to these words went the Wölfin again to Black Kan now before the construction sat. Behind her the puppies caught in to whisper. Malayra also knew why.


>> Whom you take then to the hunting? <<, the alpha Wölfin Black Kan asked.
>> Hmm. I take Borgo, Shira, Siko and Nahaki with... and Mintaka. <<

He hurried get rid and collected during his walk by the camp the chosen. The group ran from the camp and the fresh smell of roe deer soon rose to them in the nose. Black Kan fell in a chewing production and crept up to a deer. He ordered to the remaining wolves to remain there and to watch. Except Shira, Siko and Borgo. Closer and closer they came to the animal. It was quiet. Very quietly. One heard only the quiet breath Black Kans. And suddenly... they had disappeared in a bush. There lasted no while and already it had caught the deer.

They trotted with the deer in the towrope back in the camp. On half of the way Nahaki and Mintaka caught a few mice. While, however, to the remaining way they stared then at the big catch. As a Black Kan the noted, he said:>> you probably do not come out at all of the amazement, or? If you are bigger we teach you the hunting with big animals. <<Both were fascinated.>> This will become difficult certain! <<, Nahaki said her big eyes about the deer during them allowed to wander.>> Position yourselves before... <<, now she spoke again with Mintaka.>> If you such an animal with his hoofs gets!!! Then, however, one is..<<The rest she did not say any more, because she thought that the others him could imagine.


sorry, for the word "Wölfin"...if I try to correct it, the "writefield" goes up and down :angry: sorry...the word c"Wölfin" calls a female wolf... ^_^

and that was just the first part of the first chapter^^
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