Gonna Be The Very Best~Pokemon Fanfic~

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Gonna Be The Very Best~Pokemon Fanfic~

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Gonna Be The Very Best...
A Pokemon Fanfic

Chapter 1: A Mysterious Arrival
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Chapter 1: A Mysterious Arrival
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I feel like I don't belong in this world. I feel dead. I might as well be. I feel anger. Distress. Betrayal. The need for revenge.

"Why?" I groaned, no longer being able to run any farther. Puffing small breaths of fire, I sit against a tree and stare into a pond. Back at me stared a worthless, stupid Charmander who believed that Trainers actually love their pokemon.

I don't cry. I never cry. But there's no mistaking that teardrop sliding down my face, then another, until I am a crying mess, my tears hot as fire, nearly steam.

Why did he betray me? Why did he release me, treat me like dirt? After one battle I had lost? Why did he expect one puny Charmander to defeat that Blastoise anyway? Why?

I want to die. I just feel so... hated. Vulnerable. I feel like my heart has been ripped out and stitched back in again, only to be ripped out all over again.

I cover my face and just let go. Crying. Letting out my hatred and emotions. When I finally pull away, I look into the pond and see a pokemon right behind me.

"WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" Surprised, I topple into the water. I try to gasp for breath, try to swim, but I feel my energy quickly draining away. I am a fire-type, after all.

Then I stop flailing. I wanted to die, didn't I? So I just let myself sink. Until a yellow paw plunged into the water and yanked me out. The pokemon must have been extremely strong, because it threw me onto the soft grass without trying.

I cough up water and open my eyes to look at my rescuer. It was a female Pikachu, standing tall and strong, with a blue bandana around her neck.

She was absolutely beautiful in my sorry eyes.

"Hey. What's up with you?" Her voice was soft yet tough, getting the point across.

"Just got abandoned. What about you?" I replied weakly, managing a small smile at this mysterious arrival.

"Me too." She locked her eyes onto mine for a moment, then smiled back. I liked that. "I guess we should team up. Wild pokemon don't get far in the wild alone, unless they're really strong or have an amazing strategy."

I don't know her, not at all, but I like her personality. "Yeah. I think we can make it."

She smiles again, and I'm beaming inside.

I'm in love with my new ally.
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Not a big Pokemon fan (I used to be, but don't watch it anymore :t-corner: ), but I think that this is pretty good!
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*bad barb **whacks on head** go watch pokemon!*

Thanks! Do you have any suggestions on how to make it better? I thought it had gone a little fast paced, but that's just me.
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Cute. <3
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Yellow wrote:Cute. <3
Thank you. :lol:

As I wrote this, I felt so bad about releasing pokemon XD They're just pixels/sprites, but still. I don't know where I got the emotion of that. Maybe just because I'm bored....

I'm rambling. :yarly:

Anyway, thanks for commenting guys!
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Rofl... you have me trying to figure out what a mix between a Pikachu and a Charmander would look like O.o
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