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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Unchanged Albino Nandi Bear Lower Text -
While technically albino nandi bears, these creatures have very different temperaments.
I believe it's supposed to say, "while technically nandi bears," judging by the context-- as it would be weird to compare the temperament of albino nandi bears to the temperament of albino nandi bears.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Eh, not really a typo, but creating a thread for that seems redundant and I'm not sure where to post this.

The Amagnae description states the following:
This is by far the safer way to get an egg, but one cannot know which sort of amagnae is going to hatch: all amagnae eggs appear similar. It is not until they have hatched that one knows which kind of amagnae it is.
I'm afraid that is not true any longer, now that we have unique species names for every creature type and they are displayed right away. It would probably make sense to either fix the description or make it so that the full species name is visible only upon hatching (although with the mass-move feature and everything, I can see how it may be problematic).

If this should have been posted somewhere else, sorry! x3


EDIT: @BBkat, yes, probably. Still, it may seem rather confusing, you know... xD It's perfectly fine if it's really meant that way, though, I just thought I'd toss that in because it hurts no one. =)
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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ZzelaBusya wrote:Eh, not really a typo, but creating a thread for that seems redundant and I'm not sure where to post this.

The Amagnae description states the following:
This is by far the safer way to get an egg, but one cannot know which sort of amagnae is going to hatch: all amagnae eggs appear similar. It is not until they have hatched that one knows which kind of amagnae it is.
I'm afraid that is not true any longer, now that we have unique species names for every creature type and they are displayed right away. It would probably make sense to either fix the description or make it so that the full species name is visible only upon hatching (although with the mass-move feature and everything, I can see how it may be problematic).

If this should have been posted somewhere else, sorry! x3
Maybe that's meant to an, in world thing that magi can't tell the eggs apart(since ya know, eggs don't usually come with labels xD).

Now, an actual typo-

From that adult text of the Black Nivalis Bears.
Adult Over the course of two years, nivalis bears grow to their full size.
The word 'adult' seems to be, randomly hanging around the beginning of the description.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Koi fish general text:
"[...] that the koi fish enables the master to breath under water for short periods of time [...]"
This should be breathe, not breath, as it is being used as a verb and not a noun.


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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Prasinis Wyrm general description:
Prasinis wyrms are only eat sweet foods – mostly the odd berries and fruits that somehow grow in the frigid Arkene.

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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Rereading the legend of how the leviathans earned their colors.
At the very bottom
Ashante dipped her had in farewell and watched him as he dove down.
Dark markings appeared on his back while he sank, as if the dark water was coloring him.
Isn't it supposed to be head?
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Vetus, general description:
They do often do so to form shelters, or walk across water.

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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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In the 12th sentencce of the Ankylocroc description:
If an ankylocroc comes near anothers chosen resting place, it will half rise and make a low growling sound, trying to scare the approaching creature away.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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The sixth sentence of the second paragraph in the Sunrise Talvar description:
During times of war these birds were the only forms of communication, because not even the fastest eagle fly where they could.
I believe it should read "could fly where they could."
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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The seventh sentence of the second paragraph of the Sunrise Talvar description:
Talvars still fly impossible far up these days, and as such are not common prey.
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