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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Kaylie wrote:One of the emoticons is labeled 'Serious Buisness' ( :srs:) <--- that one

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe it's supposed to be 'Business'.
That may or may not be purposeful. :derp: I interpret that it is.

From Agaori description:
Although these birds can be seen fluttering all over the castle and it's surroundings lands...
it's should be its
Also, the descriptions of their mating and the like might be confusing. I'm not sure if it was meant to be left up to interpretation.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Crazyflight wrote:
Kaylie wrote:One of the emoticons is labeled 'Serious Buisness' ( :srs:) <--- that one

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe it's supposed to be 'Business'.
That may or may not be purposeful. :derp: I interpret that it is.

From Agaori description:
Although these birds can be seen fluttering all over the castle and it's surroundings lands...
it's should be its
Also, the descriptions of their mating and the like might be confusing. I'm not sure if it was meant to be left up to interpretation.
That's what I was thinking, but I pointed it out just incase XD
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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This may not be very important :derp:
In the second paragraph of the Autumn Expedition Quest, you left an 'e' off the end of 'adrenaline'. Basically it just says adrenalin. :lol:
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Earth Serendin, general description:

Its nimbleness makes it well-suited to both mountainous and wooded areas, as it can move up steep slopes and through treetops with equal ease and speed.

Shouldn't it be wooden?

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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Wooded is correct there. Wooded means covered with growing trees.

Wooden means made or consisting of wood (the product of trees).
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Ah, thanks! I didn't know that.

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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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I found a few typos in the quests...but now I've finished them and I've forgotten which ones... xD
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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In the egg description for the Aurora whales, it says "These blue egg has a strange bubble around it, and floats away if not held tightly."
Most of the sentence is singular, so it should read "This blue egg", etc.

In the adult description, near the middle, "It's rather difficult to miss a aurora whale, though..." etc. It should be "... to miss AN aurora whale".
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Not sure if this was mentioned yet but since it isn't fixed I'll mention it anyway.

In the description of Vetus hatchling there is this sentence:
They do often do so to form shelters, or walk across water.


Saying "do" twice here doesn't sound right. Either say "They often do so to form shelters" or "They do so often to form shelters" but how it is doesn't roll off the tongue.

Another description error is here under the Voro manticore hatchling:
They practice learning how to stalk silently, and pounce on anything moves.
You are missing a "that" in there. It should be "and pounce on anything that moves."

Further more for Voro manticore hatchling:
Their jaws seem to grow impossible wide for a split second,
Should be "Their jaws seems to grow impossibly wide for a split second,"

Here is one on Arkenian Tantivus hatchling:
If not out of reach, a tantivus hatchling will will happily munch on a torch or even a lantern.
This just needs one less will in it.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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In the Noctis Enox description, there are 2 random sets of ''???'' in the middle of the first and last sentence of the first paragraph.
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