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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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These hatchlings are vain little things, and greatly enjoy human company. If left alone for two long, a bored hatchling will make a run for it, breaking into the castle and harassing everyone. Although these little hatchlings cannot run very quickly, they know full well that they are too heavy to be herded or picked up. So, they find the busiest area in the castle and lay down, oftentimes surprising magi by spraying them with water from their trunks. The easiest way to remove them is to offer them their favorite treat; watermelon. A trail of slices usually suffices to bring even the most unruly of kordaetis elephants back to their place by the lake.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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From the Goldfish description:
"Golfish" hatchlings are usually seen with the krakens and leviathans.

This is more of a wrong word than a misspelling:
"They are very particular to fruits, which are very difficult for them to procure." It's from the Topo Wyrm description, and I believe it's meant to say "partial to fruits" (as in having a liking for fruits) instead of "particular".
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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The description of adult Ardulen Grotesques has ??? in place of the ':

"Keep???s", "don???t", "weren???t"
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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darksouls wrote: ↑June 8th, 2024, 6:07:33 am Adult male Mohi Melcu! (got an adult female, no dimorphism)

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It's easy to distinguish a melcu adult from other snails because of their shells. There are many gold and yellow snails, but no others have patterns that display feelings in their shells. The melcus are sociable and seek a magis' company from the day they hatch. By the time they reach adulthood, the melcus are so accustomed to humans that they have no desire to live in the wild. The adults are comfortable living in the Keep, accompanying magi wherever they go, happy to use their magic to show the emotions of those around them. They act as brooches and badges, sticking their bodies to cloaks and showing what the wearer feels. On some occasions, they can even be convinced to change their patterns to the amusement of children. However, the melcu adults are honest beings, refusing to show a different emotion than the one felt. Because of this, they are trusty creatures, the magi knowing a paiga will never lie for its owner.

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It's easy to distinguish a paiga adult from other spiders because of their bodies. There are many gold and yellow spiders, but no others have patterns that display feelings in their abdomens. The paigas are sociable and seek a magis' company from the day they hatch. By the time they reach adulthood, the paigas are so accustomed to humans that they have no desire to live in the wild. The adults are comfortable living in the Keep, accompanying magi wherever they go, happy to use their magic to show the emotions of those around them. They act as mood rings, wrapping their long, thin legs around a finger and showing what the wearer feels. On some occasions, they can even be convinced to change their patterns to the amusement of children. However, the paiga adults are honest creatures, refusing to show a different emotion than the one felt. Because of this, they are trusty beings, the magi knowing a paiga will never lie for its owner.

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Don't know if anyone noticed this yet, but the last line of the adult description says "paiga" on both creatures. Should the Melcus one say "melcus will never lie for its owner." ?
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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They have an eye for esthetics
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From the Gerbera Crystalwing's General description:
No one seems to mind it, though, as exposure to gerbera crystalwins
I do think they're crystalwins, but perhaps a G could be found :P
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a typo on the White Aculeus General description:

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She used vast quantities of the honey in a veign [should be corrected to "vain"] attempt to become immortal.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Typo in the Diamond Wyrm description. - bestiary/927

They are tought to be cousins to the Coal Wyrms, only living even in deeper caverns where the pressure is much higher.

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Typo in the Southern Desgolo description. - bestiary/1036

This ability, however, cab be used to clear fields and small forests of the desgolos as well, as a lure with strong lingering magic is sure to draw in any desgolos within a few hundred yards.

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Typo in the Brontotherium description. - bestiary/110

It takes a great deal to drive these placid creatures to anger, but once they have been provoked, it is better to stay away until the calm down on their own.

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There is a missing word in the general description of all the Prism Foxes.
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"They are incredibly useful to pick out young magi who may not where their strengths lie."

I believe it means to say "who may not know where their strengths lie."
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